Wednesday, 12 November 2014

Writing draft 3

My Goal.. is to use a variety of appropriate planning tools to develop idea.


At camp it was our turn to do the deadly rock climbing then when I got up there A wasp past me and it looked like it was gonna sting me and me falling of the scary tower.

As I was going down it looked like she was going to let go and my heart was telling me don't go down. I looked down at my group it looked like I am at the top of the sky tower. Beside me was Jacob. He looked down and his heart was saying this is not going to be fun, I agreed. Then As I was going downOn the wood It felt like I was going down on a slug because it was so slippery.




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Tuesday, 11 November 2014

Writing draft 2

My Goal.. is to use a variety of appropriate planning tools to develop idea.



As the wasp past it looked like it was gonna sting me then me falling off the sky tower
As I was going down it looked like she was going to let go and my heart was telling me don't go down.
I looked down at my group it looked like I am at the top of the sky tower. Beside me was Jacob. He looked down and his heart was saying this is not going to be fun, I agreed.

Sunday, 9 November 2014

Writing Draft 1

My Goal.. is to use a variety of appropriate planning tools to develop ideas


As the wasp past it looked like it was gonna push me of.
As I was going down it looked like she was going to let go and my heart was telling me don't go down. I looked down at my group it looked like I am at the top of the sky tower. Beside me was Jacob. He looked down and his heart was saying this is not going to be fun, I agreed. Then I started to go down on the wood. It felt like I was going down on a slug because it was so slippery.

Thursday, 30 October 2014

Athletics goal

My goal for Athletics is javelin because i need to throw the javelin like a aeroplane not like a rocket ship.

Monday, 27 October 2014

Reading radio

reflection: i give it a 10 out of 1 because we were mucking around and we were saying the words to fast and next time we could improve on speaking slowly and not mucking around or playing around with mike

Tuesday, 21 October 2014

Pangram

We have be doing a pangram because we can use every alphabet and pangram means you have to use every alphabet in a pangram .we have made this much 
Godziller jumped over the fence an the queen screamed and had to get a Xray because her leg was broken on his bum and the king was sad

Wednesday, 15 October 2014

Shrinkage

WALT: we are learning how to summarise a story

The girl (Pippa) chose to be friends with Kyle. 
And she dicided to do the dare (really stupid) and the dare was to go steal at a shop.
She could have payed for it but she shop lifted.
She thought that they were her friends but they ditched her and she had to face her punishment.

She had choices:
To not steal 
Chose to be friends with Kyle 
Payed for the item 
To commit pipi stole
She did the wrong thing