Wednesday, 12 November 2014

Writing draft 3

My Goal.. is to use a variety of appropriate planning tools to develop idea.


At camp it was our turn to do the deadly rock climbing then when I got up there A wasp past me and it looked like it was gonna sting me and me falling of the scary tower.

As I was going down it looked like she was going to let go and my heart was telling me don't go down. I looked down at my group it looked like I am at the top of the sky tower. Beside me was Jacob. He looked down and his heart was saying this is not going to be fun, I agreed. Then As I was going downOn the wood It felt like I was going down on a slug because it was so slippery.




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